From: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Date: Thu, 13 Sep 2012 23:55:54 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: NEWS: language corrections
X-Git-Tag: v11~40
X-Git-Url: http://review.tizen.org/git/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=a7fbae03158ab8449e0ff7220b1d92f075d1aadd;p=platform%2Fupstream%2Fkmod.git

NEWS: language corrections
---

diff --git a/NEWS b/NEWS
index 36a7bf0..3f307bd 100644
--- a/NEWS
+++ b/NEWS
@@ -4,41 +4,41 @@ kmod 10
 - New features:
 	- Read coresize from /sys if supported
 
-	- Add flag to kmod_module_probe_insert() to apply blaklisting during
-	  probe only if mod is and alias. Now modprobe uses this flag by default.
+	- Add flag to kmod_module_probe_insert() to apply blacklisting during
+	  probe only if mod is an alias. Now modprobe uses this flag by default.
 	  This is needed to fix a change in behavior regarding module-init-tools
-	  and ultimately make us loading a blacklisted module.
+	  and ultimately makes us loading a blacklisted module.
 
 - Better formatting in man pages
 
-- Add option to disable man pages at build time
+- Add option to disable building man pages at build time
 
-- Fixes in testsuite and refactor of LDPRELOAD'ed libraries
+- Fixes in the testsuite and refactoring of LDPRELOAD'ed libraries
 
 - Re-licensing testsuite as LGPL
 
 kmod 9
 ======
 
-- Improvements to testsuite:
+- Improvements to the testsuite:
 	- Check for correct handling of softdep loops
 	- Check for correct handling of install command loops
 
 - Bug fixes:
 	- Fix build with compilers that don't support --gc-sections
-	- Handle errors when dealing with gzipp'ed modules
-	- depmod now handles errors while writing indexes, so it doesn't end up
-	  with corrupted index without telling the user
+	- Handle errors when dealing with gzipped modules
+	- depmod now handles errors while writing indices, so it doesn't end up
+	  with a corrupted index without telling the user
 
 kmod 8
 ======
 
 - No new features, small bug fixes only.
-	- Fix bug in "modprobe -c" output: be compatible with
+	- Fix a bug in "modprobe -c" output: be compatible with
 	  module-init-tools
 
-	- Give an useful error message when init_module fails due to bad
-	  parameter or unknown symbol
+	- Give a useful error message when init_module fails due to bad
+	  parameter or unknown symbols
 
 	- Fix doc generation
 
@@ -51,8 +51,8 @@ kmod 7
 	2. /run/modprobe.d
 	3. /lib/modprobe.d
 
-- Fix setting CFLAGS/LDFLAGS in build system. This prevents us from not
-  allowing user to set his preference
+- Fix setting CFLAGS/LDFLAGS in build system. This prevented us from not
+  allowing the user to set his preferences.
 
 - Bug fixes:
 	- Return same error codes of module-init-tools when removing modules
@@ -61,7 +61,6 @@ kmod 7
 	  same of the running kernel
 	- 'modprobe -r' always look at all command line arguments
 	- Fix '-q' usage in modprobe
-	-
 
 kmod 6
 ======