From: Father Chrysostomos <sprout@cpan.org>
Date: Mon, 17 Jan 2011 02:06:29 +0000 (-0800)
Subject: Some perlcall clean-up
X-Git-Tag: accepted/trunk/20130322.191538~6060
X-Git-Url: http://review.tizen.org/git/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=95e84303050147d5b786178c406a11485b1a9719;p=platform%2Fupstream%2Fperl.git

Some perlcall clean-up

Multi word adjectives should be hyphenated.

A preposition should not be used like it’s a conjunction.
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diff --git a/pod/perlcall.pod b/pod/perlcall.pod
index e32e77e..5ef1aa9 100644
--- a/pod/perlcall.pod
+++ b/pod/perlcall.pod
@@ -25,10 +25,10 @@ function that will be called whenever something nasty occurs. What we
 would like is to be able to specify a Perl subroutine that will be
 called instead.
 
-=item * An Event Driven Program
+=item * An Event-Driven Program
 
 The classic example of where callbacks are used is when writing an
-event driven program like for an X windows application.  In this case
+event driven program, such as for an X windows application.  In this case
 you register functions to be called whenever specific events occur,
 e.g., a mouse button is pressed, the cursor moves into a window or a
 menu item is selected.