Use passive language in test-test-environment-setup.xml

Changes the single instance of "we" in this file.

Minor grammatical fixes.

diff --git a/docs/reference/node-startup-controller/test-test-environment-setup.xml b/docs/reference/node-startup-controller/test-test-environment-setup.xml
index f27266a..f624d67 100644 (file)
--- a/docs/reference/node-startup-controller/test-test-environment-setup.xml
+++ b/docs/reference/node-startup-controller/test-test-environment-setup.xml
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@
     </para>
     <programlisting>dlt-daemon -d</programlisting>
     <para>
-      Afterwards, the <literal>dlt-receive</literal> can be used to forward all
-      messages logged via the DLT to a specific file. The following command attaches
+      Afterwards, the <literal>dlt-receive</literal> tool can be used to forward all
+      messages logged via DLT to a specific file. The following command attaches
       the <literal>dlt-receive</literal> tool to the <literal>dlt-daemon</literal>
       running on the same machine and writes all output to
       <literal>/tmp/dlt.log</literal>:
@@ -56,10 +56,10 @@
     </para>
     <programlisting>12 2012/08/01 10:30:32.247913   17066086 006 ECU1 <emphasis role="bold">NSC- CTRL</emphasis> log info V 1 <emphasis role="bold">[Active state of unit "node-startup-controller.service" changed to active]</emphasis></programlisting>
     <para>
-      The fields we are interested for debugging and testing in are the Apid
-      (Application ID), Ctid (Context ID) and the Payload. The test cases described
-      in the following chapters include the exact log values for these fields needed
-      to verify the correctness of behaviour of the Node Startup Controller.
+      The fields relevant to debugging and testing in are the Apid (Application ID), Ctid
+      (Context ID) and the Payload. The test cases described in the following chapters
+      include the exact log values for these fields needed to verify the the Node Startup
+      Controller is behaving correctly.
     </para>
   </refsect1>
 </refentry>