[patch] readabilty tweaks

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p4raw-id: //depot/perl@31820

diff --git a/ext/B/B/Concise.pm b/ext/B/B/Concise.pm
index ee3dc83..aafa5e5 100644 (file)
--- a/ext/B/B/Concise.pm
+++ b/ext/B/B/Concise.pm
@@ -1224,9 +1224,9 @@ obviously mutually exclusive with bigendian.
 
 =item B<-src>
 
-With this option, the rendering will print the 1st line of source code
-that generates the following sequence of opcodes that comprise the
-statement.  For example:
+With this option, the rendering of each statement (starting with the
+nextstate OP) will be preceded by the 1st line of source code that
+generates it.  For example:
 
     1  <0> enter
     # 1: my $i;
@@ -1246,6 +1246,7 @@ statement.  For example:
     b      <$> const[PV "line "] s
     c      <@> print vK
     # 5:     print "$i\n";
+    ...
 
 =back
 

diff --git a/pod/perlglossary.pod b/pod/perlglossary.pod
index 1663ad3..69692b3 100644 (file)
--- a/pod/perlglossary.pod
+++ b/pod/perlglossary.pod
@@ -880,8 +880,8 @@ included, which have now fallen out of common use.  It has been suggested
 that these modules should be removed, since the distribution became rather
 large, and the common criterion for new module additions is now limited to
 modules that help to build, test, and extend perl itself.  Furthermore,
-the CPAN (which didn't exist by the time of Perl 5.0) can become a new
-home dropped modules. Dropping modules is currently not an option, but
+the CPAN (which didn't exist at the time of Perl 5.0) can become the new
+home of dropped modules. Dropping modules is currently not an option, but
 further developments may clear the last barriers.
 
 =item dweomer