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+++ b/pod/perldelta.pod
@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@ perldelta - what is new for perl v5.15.1
 
 =head1 DESCRIPTION
 
-This document describes differences between the 5.15.1 release and
-the 5.15.0 release.
+This document describes differences between the 5.15.0 release and
+the 5.15.1 release.
 
 If you are upgrading from an earlier release such as 5.14.0, first read
 L<perl5150delta>, which describes differences between 5.14.0 and
@@ -59,13 +59,13 @@ pads.  See L<perlapi/Pad Data Structures> for more information.
 
 =item *
 
-The short-circuiting operators C<&&>, C<||>, and C<//> are now
-considerably faster in the short-circuiting case due to reduced
-OP-tree traversal.
+The short-circuiting operators C<&&>, C<||>, and C<//>, when chained
+(such as C<$a || $b || $c>), are now considerably faster to short-circuit,
+due to reduced optree traversal.
 
 =item *
 
-The implementation of C<s///r> makes one less copy of the scalar's value.
+The implementation of C<s///r> makes one fewer copy of the scalar's value.
 
 =item *
 
@@ -120,15 +120,15 @@ C<@*>) that do not interpolate without braces [perl #93990].
 
 =item *
 
-L<CGI> has been upgraded from version 3.54 to version 3.55
+L<CGI> has been upgraded from version 3.54 to version 3.55.
 
-[THINGS THAT MAY BREAK YOUR CODE]
+Things that may break your code:
 
 C<url()> was fixed to return C<PATH_INFO> when it is explicitly requested
 with either the path=>1 or path_info=>1 flag.
 
 If your code is running under mod_rewrite (or compatible) and you are calling C<self_url()> or
-you are calling C<url()> and passing path_info=>1, These methods will actually be
+you are calling C<url()> and passing C<< path_info=>1 >>, These methods will actually be
 returning C<PATH_INFO> now, as you have explicitly requested, or has C<self_url()>
 has requested on your behalf.
 
@@ -148,6 +148,10 @@ Examples of affected method calls:
 
 =item *
 
+L<CPANPLUS> has been upgraded from version 0.9105 to version 0.9108
+
+=item *
+
 L<Compress::Raw::Bzip2> has been upgraded from version 2.035 to version 2.037
 
 =item *
@@ -167,22 +171,11 @@ IO::Compress::Zip when the content size was exactly 0xFFFFFFFF.
 
 =item *
 
-L<CPANPLUS> has been upgraded from version 0.9105 to version 0.9108
-
-=item *
-
 L<Cwd> has been upgraded from version 3.36 to 3.37, to address an
 incompatibility with the EPIC debugger.
 
 =item *
 
-L<diagnostics> has been upgraded from version 1.22 to 1.23.
-
-It now knows how to find descriptions for diagnostic messages ending with a
-dot, instead getting confused by it.
-
-=item *
-
 L<ExtUtils::MakeMaker> has been upgraded from version 6.57_05 to version 6.58
 
 =item *
@@ -232,11 +225,6 @@ all new sets of codes will be added in the Locale::Codes namespace.
 
 =item *
 
-L<attributes> has been upgraded from version 0.14 to 0.15, as part of the
-lvalue attribute warnings fix.  See L</Selected Bug Fixes>, below.
-
-=item *
-
 L<Math::BigInt::FastCalc> has been upgraded from version 0.28 to version 0.29.
 
 The XS code is now compiled with C<PERL_NO_GET_CONTEXT>, which will aid
@@ -276,6 +264,18 @@ Added SetStdHandle and GetStdHandle functions
 
 =item *
 
+L<attributes> has been upgraded from version 0.14 to 0.15, as part of the
+lvalue attribute warnings fix.  See L</Selected Bug Fixes>, below.
+
+=item *
+
+L<diagnostics> has been upgraded from version 1.22 to 1.23.
+
+It now knows how to find descriptions for diagnostic messages ending with a
+dot, instead getting confused by it.
+
+=item *
+
 L<threads> has been upgraded from version 1.83 to 1.84
 
 An unused variable was removed from the XS code.
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ Perl 4-era .pl libraries
 Perl used to bundle a handful of library files that predate Perl 5. Most of
 these files, which have been deprecated since version 5.14.0, have now been
 removed. If your code still relies on these libraries, you can install them
-again from C<Perl4::CoreLibs> on CPAN.
+again from L<Perl4::CoreLibs> on CPAN.
 
 =back
 
@@ -463,9 +463,6 @@ the attribute.
 
 =item *
 
-=for comment
-Not necessary for perl5160delta
-
 The remaining discrepancies between explicit and implicit return from
 lvalue subroutines have been resolved.  They mainly involved which error
 message to display when a read-only value is returned in lvalue context.
@@ -476,9 +473,6 @@ in which it could happen where previously syntax errors.
 
 =item *
 
-=for comment
-Not necessary for perl5160delta
-
 Explicitly returning a tied C<my> variable from an lvalue subroutine in
 list lvalue context used to clear the variable before the assignment could
 happen.  This is something that was missed when explicit return was made to
@@ -486,9 +480,6 @@ work in 5.15.0.
 
 =item *
 
-=for comment
-Not necessary for perl5160delta
-
 A minor memory leak, introduced in 5.15.0, has been fixed.  It would occur
 when a hash is freed that has had its current iterator deleted
 [perl #93454].
@@ -530,7 +521,7 @@ enclosing C<given> block [perl #93548].
 =item *
 
 A problem with context propagation when a C<do> block is an argument to
-C<return> has been fixed.  It used to cause undefined to be returned in
+C<return> has been fixed.  It used to cause C<undef> to be returned in
 some cases of a C<return> inside an C<if> block which itself is followed by
 another C<return>.